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The Perfect Freind

                                                              I was here
                                                        but know I'm gone
                                                  I left my name to carry on
                                                      those who knew me
                                                            knew me well
                                                          those who didn't
                                                                  ohwell

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  • Snap.Crackle.Pop
    May 12, 2008
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    wow

    lindsay-- this poem was really good! Did you write this?!! This was really well, and I could relate to this well.... but i am not sure why you picked that title.... I liked the third line the best....
    I dont know what about it, but it really touched me. Keep writing.


  • leland
    May 12, 2008
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    lol