This feeling, that in my heart, resides~
the one that casts the shadows away;
that no more can I fight nor hide
the growing admiration every day.
A single word, simple and true;
from my soul, with meaning deep~
caresses whispered in tender hue
heard in the dreams I keep.
And from the fountain of life and love,
a gentle sip to seal the blessed fate.
With guidance from the Lord above~
granted patience as I wait.
My hand is here, come fly with me~
mended wings won't be denied.
That all I wish is to set you free
with this feeling, that in my heart, resides.
Author notes
Used the song: Can't Fight This Feeling
along with a bit of a mix from some other prompts.
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In a list
A contest entry
- Talk To Me Of Love by Heavenly Angel.
475 points, ended May 19, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Your comments are always appreciated, please leave one.
Comments
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I think this is beautifully done. It has a simple style and yet you can feel so much from it. The ending is perfect, it aches. Lovely job. Thank you for sharing this with me and best wishes to you in all of your endeavors. Keep that quill dipped in ink and ever ready for use dear poet.
♥ Touchof1der -
So very nicely and beautifully written!
Very much enjoyed this piece..sigh...
Wishing you the very best of luck! Thank you!
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very thoughtful poem you have written here Storm! I am glad I stopped by to read it. good luck in the contest and keep writing always ~
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