Undecided
Twisting, turning, mocking,
The low road, the easy road
Shimmering, glowing, singing
The high road, the hard road
I lift my head and turn towards the high road
But responsibility trips me
Falling, wind clogging my senses
Hello low road
Hello low road
Author notes
This is kinda about life and how so many people choose the low road, the easy path.
Dancing the Rumba
A contest entry
- Next Round by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended May 24, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Hmmm, kinda wierd isn't it
Comments
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whoah.
this one makes absalute sense to me.p.s.never take the short way because it may be the worse way later.
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The words just seem to blah or overused to me. give it a 70%
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75%
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Prompt:
Taking the High Road
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