I lay in your womb,
Months,
Waiting to show what real love is,
For the Beauty to be born,
I felt the many stange hands that patted me,
After the hours of labor I put you through,
I'm sorry I put you through so much pain,
I know you forgive me,
I can tell by the love in your eyes,
The way you look down at me,
Safe in your Arms,
The way you kiss my barely there hair,
We know it will grow,
I'm sorry I lost you mommy,
But I see you everyday,
I peek over the clouds,
I see you everyday,
I am the rain rain,
I never got the change to give you a sloppy kiss,
I see you everyday,
I throw Daisy petals over the clouds,
These are all my kisses,
When you look up at the stars everynight,
The shining eyes are me,
Mommy I want you to know,
That I see you everyday,
A contest entry
- Hush Little Baby by SomeonesToySoldier.
1900 points, ended May 16, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I wrote this for a women who lost her child
Comments
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Its so sad loosing the innocent ones. They havent done anything yetthat you could say anything negative about then. But some arent meant for this place and pass on to be with God. I'm sorry for the person that this is written too. It is a good memorial.
One thing though that I might offer a sudgestion about is line 18. I'm not sure if you lost a word in there but it really doesnt make any sense. That is the only flaw your poem had. Thank you for entering it into my contest and good luck.
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