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Good Times/Bad Times

       
                                                        Many broken peices
                                                      Shattered, now apart
                                                    What can I do to mend it?
                                                    To mend by broken heart?

                                                 

                                                      I walk along the beach
                                              Leaving footprints cold and bare
                                                  How can I enjoy the sunset
                                            When there's no one here to share


                                                  There used to be a pair,
                                                Of footprints next to mine.
                                        But they washed away with there waves
                                                  And shifting sands of time


                                                        All I can do now,
                                            Is to remember how things were
                                          the good times, not the bad times
                                              Whitch caused my heart to stir.



                                                          To live or die,
                                                    What does it matter?
                                                  While I am in this state
                                I didn't know how much I loved being your friend
                                                    Until it was too late.

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  • DeSiBoO14
    June 8, 2008
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    gREaT pOeM!!i LuV iT n Da FlOw!!..ChEcK oUt My PoEmS n TeLL mE wAt U tHiNK!!.


  • whiterabbit.
    May 16, 2008

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    aw this is a wonderful poem doll. I really love it. It flows so well and the emotions in it really show through.


  • Snap.Crackle.Pop
    May 15, 2008
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    lindsay---
    This is amazing! The words you rhymed were excellent! I wouldnt change one bit of this poem! Keeep it the way it is.

  • Lyrics-Lover-Me
    May 14, 2008
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    wow

    i like it!!!!! it is prettyyyy good. :]


  • slaughter--x
    May 13, 2008
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    I like it. :]

  • Snap.Crackle.Pop
    May 12, 2008
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    oh my god lindsay! i wush i was as good a writer as you! Holy crap!! this was so good!!! oh my god!!!!! you are so talented, and thank you for sharing this great write!
    This poem was so good and I could relate to this oh, so good! Omg! I am going to put a link to this on my page--- best poem I have ever read!

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