I wonder if
you miss someone {{me}}?
if you feel this
empty.
alone.
anxious
to
be
loved;;
if time stands still for you [[like for me]] until we.meet.again.
&& the days are devoid of meaning ((the past two months)) except ((17 more days ‘till I see you again));; just // getting // by
s e v e n t e e n . d a y s
with no meanings but your voice
&& soon your touch…
don’t.dare.to. d r e a m
&& I wonder if you know
my heart doesn’t beat since the last time I pressed my body *t*i*g*h*t* against yours
&& I’ve felt nothing but ((oh.so.cold)) since the last time your fingertips s e a r e d my
t.h.r.o.b.b.i.n.g flesh
&& that this e m p t y ache inside me
[[is nothing but missing]]
{{you}}
Author notes
I did **not** just write this...
ever missed someone so much it physically hurts?
Meh. First 'love' poem I've ever written about a specific person. I get to see him in 17 days though. XD
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I honestly can't believe that I just wrote this.
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I can relate to missing someone so bad it physically hurts... =[
I know this was written a long time ago, but I still love it. -
Wow! I love this. Absolutely, completely love it. This is such a terrific write! Keep up the good writing hun!
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yes i have missed someone so much it physically hurts
and i do today and have for so long now
this reminds me of the guy i cant wait to see and im counting down the days
thanks for reminding me i needed that =)
very good write
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I'm missing mine too :/
Almost two months left before I see him again.
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Lovely
So amazingly written I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Savina
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a good piece in the dirty pretty form - aye i have missed someone so much it hurts, i think many have somewhere along the curve of their life, a good poem.
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good one
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