In ghostly graveyards.
specters of evil arise
to envelop incoming souls;
banshees bewail loudly
announcing the dead
as they pass through
gates of darkness,
to reside forever
in eternal hell.
Author notes
Haunted_by_BloodRosesCollection
30 words
just thoughts (dark of course, lol) on the picture
A contest entry
- PIF by LadyDementia.
700 points, ended May 13, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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now this bg works a lot better.. though you know what I may have a bg with the grim reaper as a border... do you still want me to look or no
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sure - go ahead and send it to me - I might use it on different writes.....
thanks
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oooh I love your dark writes so much.. see you've now got me addicted to your dark poetry as well.. You did an outstanding job with this poem. Congratulations on the HM.. YEAH!!!!
kat
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Thank you kat - I thought you liked 'dark' writes?
Glad you liked (am changing the bg again - deleting this one...lol)
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Very nice, the imagery is chilling and spot on. Superb take on the picture. Thank you for your entry and good luck
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Thank you 'LadyD' - glad you enjoyed.
Thanks for the HM!
blessings
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Eeek.. spooky!! Gave me a shiver... wonderful write hun!
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Thank you so much kiwi!! Glad it gave you shivers..lol.
blessings
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Hey my Friend ~
A fine trodden path of darkness.....I would not like to be greeted by this horrific demon ~
....and since I am born again, I shall not lay eyes upon the Beast ~
Nice write, with just the right amount of raw-depth to draw your Reader in ~
Good luck and God bless you,
Bear ~
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Thank you Bear for the lovely comment and clappies. I appreciate it.
blessings
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Wonderfully written and very eerie ~ best of luck in the contest
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Thank you 'MysticalRayne' for reading, the lovely comment and clappies on 'Necropolis..' Am pleased you enjoyed.
blessings
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Muahhhhh!!! Darkly delicious!!!
Best of luck!!!
Az
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Thank you Az! I am pleased you enjoyed 'Necropolis..'.
blessings
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Wonderful words written to the prompt. There is an eerie pall that engulfs your words. Loved the alliteration in the title. The only edit I might suggest would be to omit the word "loudly" as it means the same as "bewails". Great entry! Best wishes!
Shana
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Thank you 'imahealer' for your lovely comment and clappies. I am pleased you enjoyed.
blessings
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Great take on the prompt. Gave me shivers!!
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Thank you Neon! Glad this gave you 'shivers'...lol
blessings
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