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[ I sit here crying for you ]

I sit here crying for you
You told me your love is true
But now I know it was all a lie
You leave me here to cry
now I see love in a diffrent veiw

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Well I am going to try to comment them all so that should be good=D

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  • ecrivain01
    May 12, 2008
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    Actually, this is not a bad poem ...

    other than your misspelling of "veiw" in the last line (should be view).

    However, it's not a limerick. Look at the link to Shadow Poetry and it will tell you how to write a limerick. It's not that hard. I even gave an excellent example with the contest rules.

    Good luck with placing your poem elsewhere.