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Killing Me Deeper

The thoughts in my head
kill my brain dead.
Like a trigger from a gun
I need this job done.
My mind is whirling
With things that I have done.
As soone as it is over,
A new life has begun.

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  • JustAnotherDreamer
    May 15, 2008
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    Sam

    haha that was good (Y)


  • Lonely Christina
    May 12, 2008

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    powerful! good job hunni..my fav lines are "The thoughts in my head
    kill my brain dead.
    Like a trigger from a gun"
    christina