Naked,
black denim caress rosy skin,
releasing saxophone blues,
blueberry scents,
chariot beneath new moon,
resting upon supple lips
arched,
back rant,
reaching drunkenly...
for drizzle of dew
illusions,
saturate reality,
dripping ocean's hue
drowning,
tongue swims channel,
perspiring upon stones
stillness,
fracture desire's vibrations,
breaths float mid harbor,
beside buoy, sipping serenity's whiskey's
urban guitars,
strum lullabies from ridges,
melting once stilled snow-caps,
sending streams down blue mountains
Congo-drums,
vibrate, penetrating shields,
rattling pearl, pressing against rise,
then riding wave, upon wave... to shore
meditating,
blue darkness gyrate,
beneath North-Star,
summiting body shutters,
the full-moon spins...
then spills.
Author notes
Prompt paint: My paint chip is: (100 words or less)
Dark blues: truly, madly, deeply
http://www.sico.ca/En/Couleur_Interieur_Bleu_Fonce.asp
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- Paint by ardentMarch.
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Comments
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your imagery is awesome...however,...I don't like your usage of so many 'ing' words in this poem
too many...
but I really like all your ideas and where you took your color prompts...very nice...
thank you for this entry
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This piece is superb in imagery, it takes you right through it. What vivid reponses this conjures. Awesome job on this one. Thank you for sharing this with me and best wishes to you in all of your endeavors. Keep that quill dipped in ink and ever ready for use dear poet.
♥ Touchof1der -
Wow.. well gosh.. that was beautifully done!! Sensuality of the best kind if you ask me... takes the reader on quite a ride!
Excellent use of that prompt!
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your paint chip is:
Dark blues: truly, madly, deeply
http://www.sico.ca/En/Couleur_Interieur_Bleu_Fonce.asp
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