Set out in Destiny along roads unknown
Called to life abundant by journeyed gates alone
In weakness made strong by the River from His Throne
Towards the prize and the possession by His Spirit He hath shown
Timeless deserts in my sands of time
Whereby I travel to travail, above Eden's lofty crime
The Darkness gathers in force, by hordes they do abide
Against design they all align, to break my will and kill my stride
A gulf and chasm in Heaven broke, for Grace would stem the tide
In war His angles fought for me, I am the Church, His purchased Bride
In a list
Do you know where your Grace abides?
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I've read religous and spirtitual poems before, and you write the best thus far. It' old, old school and I like it!


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A great piece of writing here. Very very powerful and full of imagery and emotion too. Keep writing, this was very good.
All the best
Wayne Leon


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I am quite blessed that you found this poem. It is always good to get a critical eye view of what one writes.
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oh. this was really great! I love the emotions and imagery here.. you did a wonderful job!!
I really loved this.. great write hun..
Angel





