inside mother's gut,
fury of hell ferments within immortal souls,
- our life's voice singing without light -
listen.....angelic hymns scorched,
sulfuric dreams taste bitter without faith,
- heaven releases satan's bride -
Author notes
I would like 10 people to pen me 30 words of wonder.
Picture Credit:
Haunted_by_BloodRosesCollection
Theme:
After the rapture, my faith believes there will be destruction upon left-behind souls
Mother's gut def: The insides of Mother Earth.......Hell -
Satan's bride def: Anti-Christ -
A contest entry
- PIF by LadyDementia.
700 points, ended May 13, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Ark, you have with powerful words shared your beliefs of what awaits those who refuse the way of salvation through Christ..Your choice of words symbolizes all that is hells' fury, and regrettably hope lost for those who have not lived to be ready for the rapture..A message in itself your write, to be heeded..Your work was worthy of the gold you received!
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Is this about a child in the womb? I wasn't sure but it can be interpreted that way, I think the poem draws a person in, congrats on the gold.
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Wow - you are so right on Ark - another beautiful job!
As we get closer and closer to that day.....it just fits! Congratulations on the well-deserved gold.
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Congratulations on you gold win ~ this piece was beautifully penned
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Congrats on the well-deserved Gold!
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Wow was surprised to see your name appear! Loved this write, awesome job! Thanks for taking the time to enter
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Stunning piece, intense and powerful. Flows effortlessly along, wit awesome imagery. Thank you for your entry and good luck
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Oh that was creepy! Very fitting for the pic... let's hope that never happens!! lol
Excellent write
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excellent
Very powerful take on the picture. Wonderful dark quality. Best of luck in the contest.
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my faith believes the same
WOW - Love the unique wording you have used in this!! Great depth - and truth. This is outstanding!! Can't pick a favorite line as I like them all.
best wishes in the contest.
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This write smoulders! Scary stuff! Well done, poet!
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Most powerful this is!!
May God have mercy on us if we don't wake up and realize that our time IS at hand!
A FINE take on the contest prompt!
Blessings to you!! -
A very in depth take on the prompt my friend. Your words always leave images with clarity lingering in the mind from the wonderful and unforgettable expressions that you tell. An enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp
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