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Rituals, Witches, And Stones

Scorched

     branches,
          circling hallowed ground,


               mid of starless night,
                    where witches once drowned

Screeches 

     and howls heard,
          center pentagram atop bones,


               ravens plunder carcass cavity,
                    while hanks divine with stones









Author notes

Prompt: Picture Prompt

Image~Haunted_by_BloodRosesCollection

A contest entry

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  • MysticalRayne
    May 13, 2008
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    Wonderful take on this prompt and congrats on your bronze


  • LadyDementia gold member
    May 13, 2008

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    Superb take on the picture, love the theme, you have used some excellent descriptions here. Thank you for your entry and good luck


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 13, 2008

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    Ohhh.. that gave me a shiver!! Which is obviously ideal for this prompt!! Well done!


  • peridotPixi
    May 12, 2008

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    i like the floating look you have given to the words its cool like that, i like the intense details each word has, good luck in the contest and keep writing, -Amy


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 12, 2008

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    Oooh I love this!
    A wonderfully dark piece and a fine take on the picture prompt!
    Rock on!!!
    All the best to you in this contest!!


  • Arkbear gold member
    May 12, 2008

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    Hey there ~

    A vision from minds' dark crevice ~

     

    Your journey of imagery sinks deep inside my morning brain......this reminds me of a good Alfred Hitchcock film,

     

    .....nice job, good luck to you,

     and God bless you,

     

    Bear ~


  • SuicidalLover
    May 12, 2008

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    Wow.....*speechless*

    Thanks for your comments and I wish you luck!
    ~Kystal Angel

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