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Not even the grains of sand can measure....

From the depths of my soul
  the grains of sand
sleeping on the beaches
  Cannot match in volume
the love that I have in my heart for you;

  Endless novels;
Poem upon poem
  cannot show you the gratitude
in my heart
  of being able to lay beside you
day by day
  week by week
  month by month
    year by year;

Life can throw whatever it wants to throw

  Its hard to imagine
almost a decade ago when we met
  and 7 years ago when we wed
seems like it was just yesterday;

  As long as the sunlight still sparkles on the waters
as long as children still skip rocks in the rivers;

  as life circles on
and our children's children
  have children

even then
  my love for you is never ending.


Happy Anniversary

 

 

 

 

Author notes

The poem made my husband cry


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  • raymondsgirl8708
    October 5, 2008

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    very sweet write. makes me look over to my fiance who is sleeping next to me and think about the love we have for each other. this is a truling wonderful write. thank you for entering.


  • Samantha Marie
    September 22, 2008
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    awh this is a beautiful write
    thanks for entering
    good luck


  • Wall Door Salad
    September 4, 2008
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    wow. i can see why it made ur husband cry. nice work.


  • Margaret Denham gold member
    August 23, 2008

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    Thank you for entering your beautifully expressed message of love in my contest. Best wishes in the judging.

    Margaret


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 27, 2008

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    so true..I agree with you..this is indeed a heart warming verse my friend...thanks for sharing it...well done...

  • Climbing2nothing
    June 17, 2008

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    Awwww what a lovely tribute to the spiral around this solar system, i enjoyed the ryhthm of it and the touching language, well penned

    w broccoli soup and crusty herb bread
    -jas


  • Kleroo
    June 11, 2008

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    Wonderful
    Alot of people do not make it as far as you have God Bless and have a great Anniversary this year and every other one

  • silverfish
    June 3, 2008

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    i like the ring (as well as the rings) in your poem, a circular sound of love vibrating like a chime in the wind. happy annivesary, poetess. -silver

  • AriesVampyre
    May 17, 2008
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    very sweet !


  • Li snuffles
    May 13, 2008

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    AWh! this was wonderful, i could feel the love tat you have for your loved one, it was really beautiful

    Love never ending, thak you so much for entering and good luck

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