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Picking at My Soul




Disturbing sights before mine eyes
A long forgotten past swept under lies
Only to reek havoc on my soul's emotions
I've committed a sin, now I'm being punished;
                  ripped apart...

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30 words
Picture Prompt - Haunted by BloodRosesCollection

A contest entry

What to do in an insane world?

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 13, 2008

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    Eek... I hope I don't get punished that way for my sins!! Great write sis!


  • LadyDementia gold member
    May 13, 2008

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    Nicely done, love the direction you took here. Very well penned. Thank you for your entry and good luck


  • In Too Deep1
    May 12, 2008

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    Oh my! A chilling take on a spooky prompt. Your words show clear images. An enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp