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I've been down to the darkness,
Black but bright,
Now I'm gonna fight,
Be happy,
Act out your daughter fantasy,
Just so you know I'm doing this for me,
Bleeding scars, no more,
I won't lock my door,
After a fight,
Please hide the knife,
Because guess what, mom?
I WANT MY LIFE!

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  • shanzy
    August 12
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    i love this poem se, its really sweet (i think)

  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    June 7

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    Welcome to Allpoetry and thank you for entering the contest

    Through pain comes experience and realisation. It's great that your mum has helped you realise this and will help you through it.

    Welcome to allpoetry and enjoy the site
    Good luck in the contest

    Faerie
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  • Hekate gold member
    May 25
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    Welcome To AP

    Hi BloodFader,

    I am really sorry to hear of all the pain and struggles that you've gone through. Freedom can be a really wonderful thing to have.

    I hope that your mom supports you in your decision.

    Please don't forget to put what option you picked in your notes.

    Kari,
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  • Dienush Greeters member
    May 18

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    This is very reassuring to your mother, I'm glad you've been able to get past such a thing. Good luck

    ~Diana


  • PhantomsAngel87 Greeters member
    May 13
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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    One of the best things a child can say to their Mother after a history of self harm, a great strong expression of self

    Please put the option used in your Authors Notes

    ♥
    Enjoy AllPoetry
    Thank you & Best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda
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  • greyhaime silver member
    May 12

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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    thanks for sharing this with us here,and well done on it. you need to put the option number in your authors notes, if you need help with this just mesage me and I'll help you out.
    good luck to you
    Grey

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