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~Defiled Emotions~

Warm tears defile my eye's; reassembling the piece's of my broken heart,
placing them back in the the box that once loved you.

Brushing off tattered trust, placing it back on a shelf until needed.
Shard's of glass shattered, my self esteem.
Falling into despair, a safety net catching my remains. 

Missing us; then realizing you will be the one missing me;
dusting my emotions off, waiting for that one true person
who will love me for who I am.
Presenting to a much worthier opponent,
the key to my heart.

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Picture credit: Noir-mariposaLaRose

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  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    May 14, 2008
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    "Brushing off tattered trust, placing it back on a shelf until needed.
    Shard's of glass shattered, my self esteem. "

    Oh wow. I really like this one ^^ There's heaps emotion all put through it and... wow.

    Thank you for entering my contest and I wish you the best of luck ^^

    Noir xx


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    May 12, 2008

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    TOUCHING

    your words reach inside and pull the tears from my heart...for a broken love and the shattered piece to put away...you are amazing my dear sweet friend...i do hope this is just a poem...you have some powerful hurt running through page...winner wrote all over itCool