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Only You Turn My Bitterness Into Something Sweet

I'm sick and tired of what this world offers
The only place I find comfort is in the arms of the Father
He wipes away my tears and holds me close
My spirit dances with the Holy Ghost

You take every sickness, you renew my health
You pile every burden upon yourself
You take them to the cross, its my punishment you bear
Sill it hurts me so much to see you up there

Wounded for our transgressions, bruised for our iniquities
Your stripes heal me, my stripes healed by your mercy
Gazing on a broken body never held so much hope
You give me a reason not to make a noose on that rope

Lord, on the days when I feel broken and beat
Only you turn my bitterness into something sweet
Cast my troubles as far as the East is from West
And you give me the strength to take another breath

You're the one light that shines when my heart's consumed by darkness
You give me sufficient love when the world seems so heartless
When I stray you patiently search and help me find my way back
You give me everything I need, your love never lacks

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  • Hate-And-Pain
    May 14, 2008

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    Wow this is amazing, i'll be honest i'm not religious, but this is so beautifully written. You have amazing talent and I loved it. Great job, good luck in your contest, you deffinately deserve gold


  • warrior-eagle
    May 13, 2008
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    I agree with Poetic Grace.
    Overall score is really 100%


  • Blooming Poet
    May 12, 2008

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    This is amazing. you were given a good prompt and maade something amazing out of it. Your overall score from me is 96%


  • warrior-eagle
    May 12, 2008
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    Prompt

    Only you turn my bitterness into something sweet.

    It's from a Christian song

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