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Behind her eyes.

What lies behind?
What lies beneath?
Fear; pure and naked
Love; pure and naked
Hatred that fuels twisted epitaphs
And contorted, constant ideas.

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I see hell in your eyes. . .

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  • Binary
    May 12, 2008
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    Excellent.

    Very well done!