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Final Pack

Missing image

My body was taken
By the rage of the sea

Silence of the deep
Consumed me


As i sank
To Neptune's garden


My last thought
Began to wonder

All the special things
Of the past i yearned

I gathered the last
Of me
And return i went

In a suitcase i packed
My every desire

Then i waltzed
My return

 

In Neptune's garden

 




 

Author notes

The line and return i went, while not right in a proper sentence, i believe is ok in this write moving from body to spirit. fits for me anyway. lol

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  • perfectsunset
    May 13

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    Such an original take on the prompt, and beautifully expressed. I like the notion and image of Neptune's Garden- very nice. Lovely write! thanks for entering & best of luck