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Once there was a rat, a cat and a bat.
So the cat said to the bat:
why do you look so sad?
The bat replied:
I'm not, I'm just sad.
So the cat said:
Off course you're sad when you live in such a shack,
and can't afford a bagpack!
Then the bat said to the cat:
Well atleast I'm not fat,
and wearing an ugly hat.
The cat got mad,
and threw a sack at the bat.
So the bat also got mad,
and bit the cat on her back.

and the rat just giggled

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my 1st poem, lolz
came out with it in 10 secands :b (u probably could guess that)

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    May 13

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    LOL, I won't even ask. Sounds kind of Dr Suess-y on some kind of wild ride.

    Welcome to AP. If you have any questions or need help with anything, feel free to IM me.
    Keep expressing through writing.
    Storm
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  • Bataran
    May 12
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    that sucks!!! i love it! but work on it ok? have you seen my poetry yet?