She was depressed
And all alone inside
When she thought of her family
All she did was cried
She tried to hide her feelings
Even when she was sad
She couldn't let everyone see
All the emotions she had
She trys real hard
To make things right
But no matter what
There's always a fight
The children are suffering
And living through hell
They hate to hear them fighting
But they would never tell
This kills her heart
So she decides
To not talk again
To her confides
Author notes
life has alot of rough rodes
Written July 31st, 2003
A contest entry
- Make Me Feel by LostInThought.
250 points, ended December 22, 2003, 25 entries
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You did a wonderful again. Your words are flowing so well. The poem is great. Thank you for your comments on a GreenHouse Visit for Desire's Dream. Take care Rick
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~!*+|GREAT WRITE AGAIN..BUETIFUL...WRITE ALOT MORE|+*!~
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Very thoughtful, I am sure many will relate to your thoughts.
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