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A Shining Light

Her gentle soul
reaches out to all
in rainbow colours
with grasp so pure.

In dark of night
her star shines bright,
in faith to follow
to guide the way.

The spirit of nature
with emotions touch
in tender care
her heart embraces.

A quill to dance
across clear parchment
words come to life
in bonded truths.

A ship of salvation
through stormy seas
with hand outstretched
all shall prevail.

This steadfast friend
speaks words of hope
for trust in her
never will be misplaced.

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For Reenie! A wonderful lady and friend.

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  • Slick99
    November 4, 2008

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    a shining light

    oh my, the first stanza is beautiful!! why didn't you win a trophy?? keep up the good work, -Slick


  • Desire gold member
    June 18, 2008

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    Oh My!!

    Oooooooooooooh this is a Beauty of a piece penned and I imagine this made Reenie smile from ear to ear

    Wonderful weaving of words and energy exuded to touch deep
    Precious verse from a Precious Spirit for a Precious Spirit
    Love this!
    I'm sorry I missed this one~
    Keep that quill dancing...
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • cherche -d -ame
    May 15, 2008

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    I am left speechless by all the beautiful words written for me. If there is a stronger word than humbled, I am that as well. You speak sheer beauty and I just hope I am worthy of living up to all that, all I can do is keep trying. But it is by the honour of knowing poets like you and those that wrote that I am reminded everyday WHAT it alll really is about. It is about the heart, the soul and trying to be as genuine as we are meant to be and you are an example of "genuine". I am so honoured to have had you write this piece of beauty,
    all my love,
    reenie

  • cherche -d -ame
    May 13, 2008
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    you do want me to cry , don't ya? I am so honoured, so flattered and humbled all in one, and please know that each word of this applies to you as well. I have not been on much [ a little sojourn for Spring and to clear my head from recent events]Not sure if you know that on x-mas morn I found out that my mom had passed away in Europe....mother in law was living with us [final stages of cancer and she dies on Feb 12th}Soooooo much to sort out....[MY mom] was such a caring and gentle loving woman [Hope I do not need to say more]My state of mind is totally screwed up.....I was not there for my mom....was doing what I HAD to do here , not WANTED to do...and now because of anger and bitterness and sadness I am sort of numbed and I wonder and it scares me that there just seem to be no tears within me to grieve the one I so loved. I do not know myself anymore it seems. But enough of that....just a big hug and thank you for being able to touch me [it shows me I am still in there somewhere]
    much love
    xoxoxoxoxo
    reenie


  • The Poetic Angel
    May 12, 2008
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    wonderful dedication

    xxx cheeky xxx

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