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Hoping

I sit in this empty room,
I look upon these plain walls,
I sit and hope maybe you'll come back,
Maybe you'll loose your eccuses and come back,
You'll swallow your pride,
Get rid of the sluts,
Keep your little man silent,
Maybe just maybe see that you were wrong,
You were wrong to leave,
To go and not ask,
Not asked what happen?
What's wrong?
Why i act the way i act?
Be so close all the time?
So i sit in this empty room,
And look upon these plain walls,
Hoping,
Hoping you'll see,
Hoping you'll realize.

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  • true.romance
    May 13, 2008

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    This is nice, adn though I may be able to figure out what prompt you used, you MUST put the prompt in the Author's Notes. Otherwise it will I will have to disqualify you, and I would hate to do that to such a good poem.