Waiting forever until he arrives
Standing, awaiting to be his bride
It's been many years by now
But yet her love never died
The pale woman in the beautiful white dress
Keeps staring into her hopeful sky
Wondering why and if he's still alive
Never once crying, though she did plenty inside
Slowly disappearing
Heart continually beating for only him
Author notes
Deviantart*** goodbye_my_love_by_Princess_of_Shadows
A contest entry
- PIF Picture Prompt; come see:) by perfectsunset.
625 points, ended May 13, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pre-Write MadNess by Mango Memories.
400 points, ended July 26, 195 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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For a sad poem, it was beautiful. Well done on such a great write
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okay... wowness. i love it. to think you are only "trying this out". I now offically hate you. jk. good write fuzzle
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oh my
this is very good. keep writing poems like this. it was amazing and you are a good writer.
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WoW!
I am soooooooooo pissed at you! You lied! You said you sucked at writing! LIAR! LIAR! PAPER ON FIRE!!!!!! You rock! I LOVE this poem! New Fav.!
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Awwwww
Beautifully sad. Great meaning though, held in such few words. Gorgeous picture. Great job -
Wow that's very pretty, and sort of sad. Nice work
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This was so beautifully written. Lovely thoughts and imagery of a love left behind but not forgotten, and the hope that still remains...
Wonderful write! Thanks for entering & best of luck
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awww... how cute! wonderful write so sad...
'Once life begins to shatter,
know that love is not the solution" lol got me inspired by the moment good write love
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WHOA that was damn good
good luck in tht contest
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This was really good hun!
You did a wonderful job with the prompt!
I really liked the imagery here..
Great job!
Best of luck!
Angel
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wow great poem to go with a beautiful pic!
christina
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this is nice, great take on the pic. gives alot of emotion into it and a story
good luck in the contest
take care -
this is some how almost hypnotizing. it's flows so well and i love your take on the prompt. great job
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very pretty...its a beautiful piece & flows well =) hope u did gd in the contest
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awwww that's cute. YOu did a great job on it. =^-^=
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Ooooo.... Wow..... I wouldn't even know where to start on the prompt! You did a fantastic job with this. I wish you luck.
~Kystal Angel
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hi
a fallen pricess from her thrown for her price has not yet come waiting every day no regreat for the day forever waiting with the roses in her hair never a fear to whom she will share. -
This is sad yet hypnotizing. Beilive it or not your poems are better than just alright. They are awesom and great. This is so sad I love it!
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this is pretty good for a person that hates writing.lol
but i did really like it. good images and i like the picture you chose.
despite the fact that marriage is the biggest mistake any one could ever make.
Loved it,
KNIGHT TIME
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