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Hope

It's dark where I am
I cannot find the light
There are shadows all around me
And my heart is full of fright

Everyone is cheerful
They never even see
That storm clouds are forming
Upon the peaceful sea

I cannot see the future
And I cannot change the past
But the present is so heavy
I don't think I'm going to last

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  • Irish Fang gold member
    May 12

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    Aw

    I like this a LOT, it's beautiful, and has that tinge of pain, it is AMAZING!

    Keep it up you

    Ily