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Devistating Dimensions

Born in a world of hatred and sin
dreams no longer an amenity
zealous to overcome this fear of brutality
for hidden in myself is a whole new dimension

Choas and misery are running through these vains
peace an illusion, whilst truth still blazes
covering me with scars so deep
how I wonder in a world that has abdicated on my dreams

Arousing in a dimension such as this
overwhelmed my dear heart, overpowered my soul
abrubtly ruining everything I have ever longed for
yet somehow a little faith is left burning

Help! Help! End this apocalypse
so the words I speak may be heard

Help me heal this devistating dimension we're all living in!


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  • This was a very wonderful write..
    You really speak out here in this piece.. It's like your stuck and yelling at the top of your lungs.. You did a wonderful job.. thank you very much for sharing.. Best of luck.

    Angel