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Shame on me

Swimming in deceit
I wanted to believe
Fooled me...
Twice

A contest entry

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  • Swan song gold member
    June 13, 2008
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    Clever very good and creative


  • VanGoghNights
    May 18, 2008
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    Amazing

    short but completely brilliant!
    i love it! Very well done
    Savina


  • background music
    May 13, 2008
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    so much said in so few words... definitly 10 words of wonder.


  • SageyBaby
    May 12, 2008

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    The contest is to give 10 words of wonder and boy did you do it! Very short but simple. Defiantly something that's happened to me. Brilliant !


  • poeticweaver gold member
    May 12, 2008
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    Nice.

    Thanks for your time and entry.
    Peace. Timothy aka poeticweaver

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