150 years ago...
I lived in a small town
Which was named after a noun
I worked for the mine diggers
They were awfully very rough
But luckily I found some gold
Then I was tough
Then I bought a wonderful house
But then along came a mouse
It scattered across my home
I found it and put it outside
I was there alone
3 years later...
I found my true love
I felt as blessed as a dove
There I stood no longer alone
Know I was truly known
A contest entry
- who might you have been in the eighteen hundreds? by Rheea.
2000 points, ended May 25, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Tell me I have done a good job.
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Well Done!
Great images here. A mouse in the house huh? Haha....
Keep up the awesome writes young poet.
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You did a great job! Thank you for entering my contest. You were awarded 300 points for the youth award. I really like animals and the mouse was funny. Your history was good and you had romance. what more could a lady ask for?
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Nice job young man, good use of image creation, imagination and non-traditional rhyme scheme. Shows the hallmarks of a poet in the making, as there is meaning beyond that in the words used in the poem. Keep up the good work mate
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Well Done
How wonderful, you are well on the way to being a brilliant poet!! Good for you. -
You have done a good job.
A very cute pleasant read. I really enjoyed it.
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thankyou eleni
good luck to you
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Great job!
Andrea - I think this is one of your best works so far! Your writing skills have improved so much - you're a poet in the making!
Love from your older cousin, Eleni xxooxx -
Very cute write!
Best wishes in the contest! Good job.
Write on!
*PEACE*
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thankyou
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thankyou
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This is too cute =)
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thanks
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great
A fine thought Andreas. Something I'm sure would of been a real joy in the long run. A most enjoyable poem. Thanks for sharing.
Brian -
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thanks
for a great comment
wishing you luck
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