The Princess was so very sensitive,
her body to the slightest touch would give.
Her skin was milk-white and very sore
from lying on an apple core.
Her bed held mattresses by the score
they reached from here to down on the floor
thus making it hard for her to see
how to find chamber pot for a pee.
A contest entry
- Twisted Fairy Tales by Hope Angel.
450 points, ended June 7, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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cute
At least she has a pot to piss in! This was cute, The Shaker
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LOL. the flow needs some work (just a tweak) but it's very cute. I remember the story well. What a fix to be in LOL.
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Funny little bit. Nice twist on the old tale.
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This is adorable. Made me giggle it did at the end. Good job
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LOL Wonderful for a chuckle. Nice to see poems that make us smile, sometimes we take ourselves too seriously.
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lol...lol. not how the story goes but very inventive. thanks so much for sharin this spot of humor with us.
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Oh this is really witty. Thanks for entering
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from lying on an apple core.
Her bed held mattresses by the score
they reached from here to down on the floor
thus making it hard for her to see
how to find chamber pot for a pee.wow this was great full of whit it made me laugh out loud thank you for sharing your poem with the group
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Fun and twisted!
I love to read the funny stuff. It puts a little smile on my solemn face. I'll give you three laughing, applauding bunnies for that. Thanks!
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Another humorous write here; I can always count on your satire! I chose this one to read, because this fairy tale always fascinated me. Best of luck in the contest!
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