I was trying to give up and failing
So now to the next life I'm sailing
It was icy outside
And I passed out and died
Because I just kept on exhaling
Author notes
Credit to the joke about smokers passing out when it's cold outside because they don't know when to stop exhaling goes to the late, great Bill Hicks
A contest entry
- Limericks ... by ecrivain01.
450 points, ended May 12, 2008, 32 entries
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Comments
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Oh, that's funny! I never expected to see a limerick on smoking. We get to poke fun at whatever we want, though, eh? Excellent flow and meter. Thanks for your entry.
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congrats on gold! very funny limerick. funny joke to
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P.S.
Who was Bill Hicks? -
Now this ...
is good.
Thanks for entering.
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