Under a dark, deep sky
A broken heart silently stands
By an open grave...
In it s mind painful
pictures pass by.
In it s heart there is
No more meaning
To go through life,
No more meaning
To live...
Under a dark, deep sky
A broken heart silently stands
By an open grave...
It has lost it s loved one...
Under a dark, deep sky
A broken heart silently stands
By an open grave...
Now when it looks
Into the grave,...
The brown dirt is
A part of her silk, smooth
Beautiful brown hair,
She looks so pale,
So without life,
So without love,...
The only friend,
The only love
I had,...
Is now dead,...
I WISH TO DIE!
Under a dark, deep sky
A broken heart silently stands
By an open grave...
Her eyes,
Once so full
Of life, are now so
Sad, so miserable, so deep,...
I can t write no more
Of her beautiful skin,
Of her beloved eyes,
Her smoothing smile,...
I cannot write no more
About the last tear
Sliding down her face,
Because I took her last breath,...
Under a dark, deep sky
A broken heart silently stands
By an open grave...
While the thick, dark, red
Blood flew down my arm
I kissed her,
I said everything
Will be alright,
I was wrong,
I took her last breath,
With just one kiss.
Under a dark, deep sky
A broken heart silently stands
By an open grave...
And I gave her my
Heart, that now every day
Stands by her grave,
Just waiting to fall in.
To once again feel her
Presence, to kiss her
And give her that last breath back.
To give her my last breath,
She was my life.
Under a dark, deep sky
A broken heart silently stands
By an open grave...
But I shall not stand
There forever,...
This is my last song,
After this,
I will take my last breath,...
I am ready to kiss her again,...
Good bye,...
A contest entry
- Goodbye, Never Seemed So Easy, Nor Ever So Hard. by xxRainbowDawnxx.
7700 points, ended May 16, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I love this poem
wow this is so great! I'm speechless it's so good. I want to be as good as you on poems! this poem is fantastic!
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oh I loved this! It was so beautiful and sad. The last lines made it for me. Hope in the near future to read more.
~OG
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The ending made this for me. I was tragic, but lovely. I did feel as if the core lines were repeated a bit too often to maintain their potency.
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Amazing.. I'm speechless!
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wow.... brilliance made flesh...
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Sad tears
The forcefulness of the line I wish to die in the mix of the piece was good and it would be a good line in my thinking in a poetry slam. Thank you for sharing, Angellightwolf
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one last is all i wished the way i wish to die my love is in ur arms. all i want my love is to bee urs. all i want my love is to die my love with ur lips agenst mine. ill i wnt my love is ur merciful love.
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WOW! I hope you win gold for this piece. It's so beautiful and sad! The lines "I will take my last breath, I am ready to kiss her again" are oh so wonderful I love it! well done!
<3
Mylee -
great write. Keep it up.
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Wow
This was
amazing
great
superb
excellent
mind-blowing
bloody brilliant
and dark...in a good way
I LOVED this poem it was really good throught out. It had great flow.
Good Luck In The contest!
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--->{Silky}
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really amazing.
woww
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