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Bed Time

Turn out your lights
It's time for bed
Fluff your pillows
Lay down your dear head

Now shut your eyes
Have a peaceful sleep
Make yourself comfy
Under the sheets

I know you can't see me
But I'll be in your dreams
To protect you from those nightmares
And all evil things

The moon and the stars
Will act as my soldiers
While I carry your sorrows
Away on my shoulders

So please little angel
Get some rest
And tomorrow you'll be
At your very best

Full of energy, full of joy
Full of happiness and smiles
Full of laughter, full of hope
Your heart no longer in denial

So please little angel
Lay down your dear head
We'll see each other in the morning
But now it's time for bed

Author notes

HOPE YOU SLEEP WELL LOL

20 words!!! lol

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  • zaidaryklief
    May 20, 2008
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    Beautiful

    The moon and the stars will act as my soldiers


  • BluesMan gold member
    May 13, 2008
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    All in all a very nice image for sleep






    You have a couple of type o's the second of which is a little disturbing Heh Heh

    "time"
    It's "tome" for bed

    "shut"
    Now "shit" your eyes

    I agree with Olivia, this is a great stanza

    The moon and the stars
    Will act as my soldiers
    While I carry your sorrows
    Away on my shoulders


  • Olivias Violin
    May 12, 2008

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    "The moon and the stars
    Will act as my soldiers
    While I carry your sorrows
    Away on my shoulders" - This is one of my favorite stanzas