Diaphanous Emotions,
Sensuous Impressions
The fervor
Trickling
Submersion
Beneath
Skin:
Caressed
In Compassion
Hands Forever Felt
Author notes
OO man do i want to continue writing so badly >.<
thanks you inspired me XD i am happy tho i dont no how closeing i followed the prompt but hey i hope it works
A contest entry
- without words by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended May 12, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - In Honor of reciving 100 HMs by peridotPixi.
681 points, ended July 8, 2008, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
thoughts? suggestions?
Comments
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Thank you for the beautiful entry to my contest,
I love the way you have used without words to say something so deep and thoughtful
I love the wonderful words you have chosen to use in this poem, I like the last three lines the best, “caressed in compassion hands forever felt” maybe if you did want to go over the word limit in that contest now would be your chance to edit, add more and make it longer although it is beautiful with the simplicity, as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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thank you ^-^
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nice
nice take on the prompt . . liked "Sensuous Impressions" and "Hands Forever Felt" . . congrats on the trophy
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A beautiful poem. A pleasure to read. You have said so much with a few words. Congratulations on the Honorable Mention.
Bless You,
Sandy
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So deeply grasping and immensely creative... x
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