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As Long As There Is A Wave... So Will There Be War

Ever changing,
    tides comb sand,

erasing ties,
    that bind man.

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    May 12

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    Nice,

    Very wonderfully inscribed within the 10 words of wonder,

    thanks for sharing, well done poet. Peace~

    Timothy aka poeticweaver