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Airborne Painting

Missing image
Wings of scarlet painting canvas as they soar
through blue skies embellished by cirrus clouds.

Just a bird, looking to return to the heart,
where the home is, a masterpiece complete.

Author notes

Bird's name: Ruby Topaz Hummingbird.
No, seriously.

Prompt: The birdie!!

Yes, I intentionally wrote "heart, where the home is", reversing "Home, where the heart is."

A contest entry

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Comments


  • PresidentDangerK2
    May 12
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    Pretty good. I liked the last stanza.

  • Karl Weiss - Topaz gold member
    May 12

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    Very nicely done indeed, a beautiful flowing and descriptive piece. the twist was very pleasant and fit nicely. thank you for youe wonderful entry in the contest.