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sekmhet eye of ra

while i appreciate the niceties, i would appreciate objective criticism more

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  • Blooming Poet
    May 19, 2008
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    you need to write NOW. We are starting to judge soon. So hurry hurry and write that poem please.


  • warrior-eagle
    May 12, 2008

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    Prompt:

    I have fallen to my knees
    As I sing a lullaby of pain
    I’m feeling broken in my melody
    As I sing to help the tears go away
    Then I remember the pledge you made to me

    Is from Promise of a lifetime by kutless