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Ill Find YOu

trust me
ill follow you til
the end
the end of time
i promise
no one will stop me
ill look back out my mistakes
there are stars passing by me
as i look for you
you are the only one i want
the only one i wanna be with
thats the truth
believe me when i say this
i love you more than my own life
you are the light of my life!
you mean so much and one day
ill find you
i will
if it takes me the rest of my life i
will i promise

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  • Lowercase Prelude gold member
    May 14

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    i think many people have felt this way or will at one point in their life. if i may suggest, on the line "ill look back out my mistakes", it would probably sound better if you changed the word "out" to "on". but good job on this.