Like a drained lake
your promises sink
leaving hearts broken
Author notes
Prompt: Promises
10 Words
A contest entry
- Give Me 10 Words of Wonder by poeticweaver.
600 points, ended May 12, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nice,
You have captured the prompt here well bro.
Thanks for your entry.. I appreciate ya.
Peace. Bro T.
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Very nicely done, my best wishes to you.
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This one is sad!
Best of luck in your contest!
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