little Amanda called to God above
carried to heaven by angels with wings
op'ning the gates to paradise with love
little Amanda called to God above
He eases her passing by sending a dove
who so softly coos and mournfully sings.
Little Amanda called to God above
carried to heaven by angels with wings
Author notes
A Triolet is a poetic form consisting of only 8 lines. Within a Triolet, the 1st, 4th, and 7th lines
repeat, and the 2nd and 8th lines do as well. The rhyme scheme is simple: ABaAabAB, capital
letters representing the repeated lines.
Source: Shadowpoetry
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Cute, and sentimental. Very simple yet effective little poem, delivered with an organization that follows the style. Loved it, but maybe try being more consistent with your capitals.
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very beautiful poem! you did a great job! It was short but very sweet. Take care! and Great job again
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I am giving you this gold trophy
and 1000 points for this wonderful poem. Thankyou. -
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I can't accept that
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Yes you can. They are my points to do whatever I want with. You earned them in my opinion, and I have sent them. Thank you.
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You Take The Gold!
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You Take The Gold!
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A beautiful yet heart-wrenching poem. So well written.
Thanks for sharing~
Az
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Beautiful, and the answer to a two line prayer, I believe. Thank you for being you. This is a masterpiece.
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Oh Tay! This is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read. I'm in tears here and I'm so very proud of you. I'm going to print this out and give it to Amanda's mommy and daddy if it's OK with you.
Love,
Amera♥
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