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My Sweet Child

My heart is sore in every corner
I don't know if I can leave my grief behind
It's impossible when that moment is always on my mind

I remember it clearly
The day I was told my son would die
I broke down and just cried

I held him every moment he had left
His days were numbered
But a smile he kept

He was robbed of life at age three
Tell me how could this be?

He was strong
Even though he was young
He could make me smile
Even up to the very end

His voice rings in my ears
His laughter plays in my mind
All I can do is remember the good times

Never again will I hear his laugh
Never again will I see him smile
My heart aches at the loss of my sweet child

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  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    May 23, 2008

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    First let me say this is a really well written poem I like the style very much.
    The content of it is very sad and heart breaking.
    I can relate to this I lost a little brother at 16 mo. old.
    May God Bless you always.


  • llaexx
    May 12, 2008
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    that is so deep im so srry if its true
    i dont know how u could live wit dat pain
    it beautifal!!