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Mirror Image

Mirror image
that is not you

a broken smile
complete with raining eyes

Your strung out look
deceives no one

I look for the person
I thought I knew

Once light-hearted
and bright eyed

Who have you become
She is not you.

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  • it was short but still bore meaning
    I felt a shard of the persona in this poem
    thank you for entering
  • This is a very well written piece.
    A lot of emotion well expressed yet kinda sad.
    Thank you for youe entry, and good luck in the contest.