The softness of your supple yolk
covers the tenderness of my green stalk,
Sunday morning’s waiting,
will you dance with me tonight?
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A hundred times over,
you are all of me.
Please tell me what you think
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this brings to mind a couple of images - both of them good! what a nifty idea for a poem. you have packed a lot into a few words. - NANGALEEMA
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sounds like a wonderful treat
love asparagus and eggs
and then the real treat
will be a dance at night...
love those shadows
Riftkin
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So very beautiful! Loved the subtle mystery of this. Wonderful write.
Az
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gentle, soft, hard, charming, seductive, sexy, sensual, beautiful, romantic, succinct...and the list goes on
I always love your tender voice in poems.
hope everything has been good with you
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Great description and metaphor, very creative. Intensity as well.
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haha! I like this!
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Do I hear Sinatra in the background? Besame mucho?
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Well, i know you love cooking but i wonder if this one is about food at all! Nice subtle touches of rhyming here too, Scott - and of course a softness which always speaks to me.
~ Nicolette
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I especially liked the last two lines, Scribe. G'night, my Friend.
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