Springtide gave
cerulean of love,
fall of red rage
brought wilting bloom,
both faded now.
Author notes
15 words
Prompt: I see each season in your eyes
A contest entry
- Quickly now or as quick as can be. 10-15-20 by Cerulean.
475 points, ended May 11, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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aweeeee ohhhhhhhhhhh you write in an interesting style. I think I might grow attached
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i love the ending....its a good poem
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"both faded now."..... I hope they bloom again for you one day soon. Sum-mery........ nice write.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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This is sweet.
To the point. Feels like a haiku. But it no haiku. Maybe it's a sneeze. Well... Will you look at what came out. Wipe your nose, baby and frame the snot. It's a beaut. Thanx for sharing and write on. One.
Dez
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Seasons come and go. I love the color cerulean. It is my favorite shade of blue. Good luck to you in the contest.
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so much cerulean going around today ... sheesh!
lol!
I enjoyed this one Michelle ... I thought you did a really good job with it!
Imagery is great and the feeling is really sad toowell done!
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Gorgeous take on the prompt, a very sad feel.
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This is a perfect take on the prompt, I was so at a loss for this one, so I am in awe!
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You trying to make me cry.
Well writ -
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No sorry
i told you i didn't know what it would come out like 
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I didn't know it was you.
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Ummmmmmmmm thank you
I didn't know this was an anonymous contest, I sorry 
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A beautiful take on the prompt. A sense of sadness carved within these well penned lines. Nicely done!!!
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Oh I love the imagery in this... stunning take on the prompt!
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Perfect!!! Love it
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Delila
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The ending was really great. It was light, but had enough meaning to make the poem complete. I also your word choice. :]
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