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am not

used to make sand-castles out of mud, because i never saw the ocean/thats all i was ever really good at/making something from all the wrong things

i've left thousands of miles of birthday cake in my wake

writing notes on coffee-stained napkins/in run down diners

to remember my desert visions..... in a cool bed at night

it's eating you away, isn't it? why won't you make me queen for a day. my skin. paper-cup thi........n. scratching/screaming. the morning dew





diamonds in my crown. isis. why would you even try? who could ever

ruin me?

am not scared. lay in the dark with all the murderers and drunks and pick stars out of the sky like rubies & gems

someone will love me....................................................................................................................................

just leave me alone

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  • tomisb gold member
    August 21
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    Can not and will not need not apply. It is obvious you have got it all defined and being the first kid on your block is just a con job.

    Everything that means anything we created on our own. The hardest job is often just finding someone woth sharing it with.

    Love, Tom B.


  • stoneage silver member
    August 21
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    three more just because I am in the mood.

  • stoneage silver member
    August 21
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    I want to blow all the points off my poems, like dust off a transcendental book.
    You set off my revolution,
    you rebel.

  • stoneage silver member
    August 21
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    I don't understand the point system but I believe that I should give points freely with out contest.

  • stoneage silver member
    August 21
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    I'm feeling crazy!

  • stoneage silver member
    August 21
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    I must count more coins!

  • stoneage silver member
    August 21
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    void applause, tonight I am a slot, in Vegas.
    I've a reverberating nerve, that has been struck
    by a non-descript god. Krishna!
    Krishna is a womb.
    Krishna is not god.
    Krishna is nature.
    Learn to love your mother!

  • stoneage silver member
    August 21
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    Making something from nothing.
    You may have left thousands of miles of crumbs but
    I have less that ten miles of birthday cake behind me and
    I am 2.666 times older than you!
    Miles of highway; kid I like your poem!
    Time is... real,
    But what is the point?
    I am a star 30 light years away
    listening to your heart.
    My hand brushes you
    down your intended path.

    Write me another poem!

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