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One More Sip of Loneliness

Pungent droplets swirl;
awaiting memory's kiss.
Lost to midnight's moment -
and tango a bed of thorns...
only a shadow to partner.

Another glass, I'll ask;
tasting the liquid lie -
just one more sip of loneliness...
a stale martini and I.

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Evening Lounge by Brent Lynch

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  • Rovingone gold member
    June 1
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    Sounds so sad and lonely. It makes you want to reach out. Wonderful poem.

  • AliceinPoetryLand Moderators member
    May 20

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    A wonderful take on this picture. You imagery and the emotions of the woman are excellent. Thanks so much for your entry.
    Gaylene