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learning how to stand alone.

tested by the sound of your voice
dreaming of a second chance.
situations where reality
no longer accompained me
only your voice remains
in my cupboard of hope
you left a broken promise
i'll never come to forget.

should I of fell to your kingdom
where doom crept upon
every step to you
with motivation lost
I might never find the way home
but rest assured
I won't ever ask you
to love me again
'cause winter has passed
and these summer days
mock my soul no more

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something of impeccable importance,
letting go is just not that easy..

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  • ConvenientExcuses
    May 12

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    "in my cupboard of hope"

    "'cause winter has passed
    and these summer days
    mock my soul no more"

    This is fantastic! I missed your poetry. Keep up the great work!


  • queen Greeters member
    May 11

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    This is a fantastic poem, the last line really strikes me. Well done

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    Barbara
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  • Blooming Poet
    May 11

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    this is beautiful. for being your first poem on AP as well. I think you should be a little more creative and come up with an amazing title to match this amazing poem.
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