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Brisk

She locked herself up inside,
From the reality of the world.
The coldness invaded
And took away her color.
Her eyes have never been this dark
Even through the reflection
Of the red and blue lights.

She watched him change
And loose his soul
All because of it.
The addiction became too strong
For either one of them to handle.

 

They needed each other to survive,
So what’s left to do?

Too bad it ended like this…..
Was anyone happy?

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  • marlene47 silver member
    May 14, 2008

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    Very descriptive and imaginative. The destruction of addiction. Captures a lost, vacant mood.
    Thank you for your entry.
    Marlene