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I was ready

I was ready
For you to be my life and my world
I already loved you before I knew you
And my love was something that I could'nt express with words
You were mine and yet taken from me without warning
But, I will meet you one day
For I believe that you are with God
And with that is a bit of comforting
You cannot be replaced with anything on this earth
For nothing is as precious as you
For you were, are, and will forever be mine
I will never forget you
You were already my heart before we met
Here I waited but only to find that you were already with God
I still haven't stopped looking at the ultrasounds
I still haven't redesigned the room I made for you because of heartache
I still haven't come into grips with reality that you will never show up
For I was ready

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  • SomeonesToySoldier gold member
    May 12, 2008
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    Its a very beautiful poem. The day before my ex died in the car accident she had the ultrasound and we found out it was a boy. I dont know what happened to the ultrasound pictures. I never saw them again. This poem really touches me on a level that is rarely reached. I'm grateful for you entering it into my contest.


  • mizclaws
    May 12, 2008
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    beautiful

    just simply beautiful--apologies ive no applause points left..if i had i would give them all to you