If my girl only knew
What the hell would she do
Knowing the girl she cares for
Is in another door
With another bitch
But whoses gonna' be the one to snitch
About the other chick
And the lickity lick
It's like a good drama flick
As im sucking on her clit
Im thinking "Oh shit"
What am I to do
If she finds out who im making love to?
A contest entry
- STAY. by DAMSELx.
420 points, ended May 29, 2008, 30 entries
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Comments
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Powerful and deep. Stunning rhyme here. Erotic and anger seems to be witin this piece too. I like the flow of your piece. The words are fired out at the reader as if you cannot get the next word out quicky enough. You have done very well with this. Well done.
Darkest
Wishes
Wayne Leon
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